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#261 Icker

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 02:14 PM

...I'm runnin' outta time so I'll do this fast,
I knew you were trouble from the start, it wouldn't last,
just like a toxic fart, that your stomach passed,
and like your heart, it's harder workin' just perhaps,
the fights are growin' now, much less before,
words heated and loud, just like a roar,
here comes the crowd, they just adore,
but you aren't proud, you're on the floor,
you can't help but feel like this, you want to walk away,
there's something that's a miss, your vision's turnin' gray,
your temple's bleed like piss, your body starts to sway,
you sit and reminisce, you don't know what to say,
you think you're cool right, but you know you're not
hangin' to pick a fight, your blood is hot,
your eyes lose sight, you'll just be caught,
your head feels light, you've been smacked a lot,
just settle down and don't go and torment,
don't be the clown that you try to represent,
and go around actin' like you have bad intent,
don't go and frown and enjoy the good moment...

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 04:08 PM

...Back when you, came into makin' this thread from bust you said,
this was the sickest time you've ever felt instead,
got to writin' quick but never had your lead,
so you went to borrow lines but chickened out and fled,
sometimes I consider this more of a business,
than a place full of games and frolic mess,
you asked for assistance, yet I said yes,
but now it doesn't seem for real anymore I guess,
'bout to retire soon, you know how I feel,
tried to convince you, but I guess we're not real,
woke up at noon, just skipped a meal,
you stealin' iTunes, you call that a deal,
I still remember the time you were out cornered alone,
I was there postin' rhymes, but you hung up the phone,
leavin' us hangin' to climb, I shoulda just known,
left us no nickels or dimes, so I'll be takin' the throne,
not that you ever owned it or even came close,
but you just got dethroned yet you still overdose,
hearin' and feelin' those groans lit by despair almost,
left by your hoes wit' nothin' you empty ghost,
now I still have some peeps around, those fakers,
they make me frown, they hate the Lakers,
but you, you're a clown, you're just like takers,
but I take your crown, you ex-thread maker...

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#263 Icker

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 04:09 PM

I have to go to my bed to come up with better lines, sorry

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 07:22 PM

...I just can't find the main, reason for unjust pain,
where which you just inflict, you can't make it rain,
I can't tell if your a dick, or just on that Mary Jane,
are you ill, not sick, 'cuz I know you jock Lil Wayne,
man aren't you just slick, you on that cocaine,
or are you serious 'bout this, would you care to explain,
is there somethin' I missed, or are you pullin' my chain,
are you just tryin' to diss, do you think I'm insane,
well I don't give a damn and it truly shows,
you'll be wonderin' why you never get them hoes,
not sayin' you're that snitch, I'm keepin' a status quo,
so I can't say which one of y'all that I really know,
do you really understand this, and understand why,
or are you just confused, you feel like you're high,
if you do know what I'm talkin' bout, go leave a reply,
but if you don't, then get outta here, I'll say good-bye...

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#265 Icker

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 07:54 PM

So you sayin that a smoke
or you just hating cuz i'm dope
your just joke and now its my time
to startin these punchlines
as I have a question to you
Why you be doubtinme
Why you question me
or are you just jealous on how
i'm able to draw people to a spot
I tell you the truth right here
i was high half the summer
for reasons that are unclear to me
but i quit dat [expletive] and sold my
last plant the other week
now thati'm able to think clearly
and be able spit some rhymes
without being paranoid on how I sound
because I have confidence beyond your mind
I know i'll kill thisband i may not be the best
right now but watch as I improve everytime

#266 ファイナルファンタジ

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 08:24 PM

...that is good to be hearin' hearin',
now you'll have to listen listen,
not sayin' that you are fearin',
and don't think that I am dissin',
I only be here for callin',
for those who will take a steppin',
forward to take the challenge,
and brave enough to be reppin',
so you can be here just chillin',
because I just rhyme to be postin',
the message that I am writin',
for others that are just carin',
so they can get better learnin',
and realize the world is comin',
and find their souls that's within 'em,
so they can be communicatin',
with us in this thread, they'll begin,
to realize what they have been missin',
but at least you're still here postin',
what you gotta say and knowin',
that I'll always be here winnin',
'cuz that's my style that I be showin',
I'll be makin' your head be spinnin',
and I'll do nothin' but laugh and grin and,
feel that there's somethin' I could be doin',
and life would be very borin',
if this thread was non-exisitin',
it'll be somethin' that I will miss and,
will have nothin' but to retire then...

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#267 Icker

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 08:30 PM

thats is odd, cuz were dem wanna be rappers
i know they here and they not postin
and need to starting weight lifting
cuz my arms are punier then twig

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 08:52 PM

...good luck with your heavy liftin',
just don't be overexerting, it will not be very fittin',
you'll find yourself to be hurtin', and realize you shoulda listened,
and you will just rip your shirt and, you'll find yourself to be missin',
in action and you'll be wishin',
for cash that you will be stealin',
unless you just pay attention,
and realize you gotta listen...

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#269 Icker

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 08:56 PM

Not going to start lifting till next summer
i lazy like that, but in the meantime
i'll just sit down and jam to MJ

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Posted September 27, 2008 - 09:59 PM

...alright but just remember the aforementioned date,
'cuz after September 30th, I won't be here just wait,
you'll see the changes soon, and it's been very great,
just listen to your iTunes, I won't make you irate,
see this has to happen, some people just hate,
and this isn't coincidence, this just happens to be fate,
so please don't argue here, I don't want a debate,
alright so hope you remember me, I just gotta say late...

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Posted October 22, 2008 - 05:17 PM

Let me kick it for a minute
Been a month since yall last did it
Let me tell yall what a freestyle bout
Got to express your mind no doubt
But it aint just about dissin each otha
You can provoke a mind by puttin words togetha
Educate yourself and the ones around you
Puttin words together thats what a mind do
Entertainin others thats what a rhyme do
Create Controversy thats what hip hop do
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Posted October 22, 2008 - 06:33 PM

...I gotta hand it to you, thought I'd never redo,
another post here, been feelin' new,
like brand new, interior,
but the old blue, exterior,
is feelin' rust, I gotta bust,
another rhyme now, it's been a while,
it's kinda foreign now, like a gold owl,
I wanna get back, what I now lack,
those rhymin' zones, that spit attack,
I woulda known, but now I've grown,
they said I'm not, they said I don't,
my style rots, that's what I'm told,
their style's hot, I shoulda fold,
but I won't give, into their needs,
I don't live, they said to me,
I'm not a kid, wrist red bleed,
they'll wanna see, I wanna leave,
but that was me, back in the past,
not now I see, it was a blast,
I want this to, fulfill the last,
and reach the al-,all mighty mass,
of TLN, "don't give me sass",
I'll resort to that, unspoken act...

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 03:49 PM

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 04:04 PM

Lyrically Wayne brings nothing to the table
Snap his neck and put a tech to his nable
His rhymes make no damn sense
Its time to get his money back from the rhymes he rents
Greatest rapper alive in his dreams
Tha cats full of ish, only a hit for the teens
Real hip hop is Preme and Guru
Back in the days with Pun and the fulla clips crew
What Wayne is trash
Sorry you predator your rap game is wack
These bars reflect on what i think
And its time for Lil Wayne to be extinct

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 04:58 PM

...I see, is that all you're going to just say,
you see, I'm gonna go all out on what to display,
so be, prepared to face fair on the part of today,
or be, ready to stay steady on what I decide to lay,
crowds be hushed and will must the will to hear and listen,
the other side is crushed and feels just the fear of opposition,
middlemen be undecided and will not side with any situation,
the rest just watch and be blessed that they're not for any position,
you claim someone I remain unnamed to be called a specific title,
I don't see this rise to fame you mentioned to be so, so why though,
is it something I missed when I pissed off the rest when I was idle,
an amazing event perhaps the slit of the wrist or something I don't know,
do you recall that last thing I mentioned in the previous post before,
the unspoken event that provoked a joke at this place and just tore,
the members here don't you remember the fear when the rest just ignored,
the least mentioned people that craved attention and only wanted more,
but that was in the past where they either left fast or just chose to remain,
they didn't have a blast but didn't wanna ask, just wanted no hate,
this fleet was a desert with no heat just the dirt of those who now reign,
and they controlled but maintained what the whole society could not say,
I always speak out against with no doubt of ever selling out,
I don't ever plan to join the clan of what they call about,
you'll never see me join ever even if I have to quit with or without,
they censor fast like cash dispenser so you can't see what I'm about,
with limited expression and provided discretion,
causes little depression and divided aggression,
it leaves me with many questions but I have the impression,
it'll be no success and they'll not even confess it,
only those who are more liked will strike any kind of notice,
while those who aren't considered part of their mankind will know this,
and what I'm saying when I replay the events, you just can't miss,
or you must be blind or just trying to find a way to not reminisce,
I'm always talking about this kinda stuff, for those who actually read,
and for those who do then I'm glad to know that you seem to agree,
or if you disagree then I beg and plead to post here and proceed,
and for those who don't do either then either leave or get off the weed...

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 07:59 PM

your a gangsta who sleeps like a wanksta. fo shizle my nizzle im up on 2 wizzles

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 08:00 PM

your a gangsta who sleeps like a wanksta. fo shizle my nizzle im up on 2 wizzles



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Posted October 24, 2008 - 08:24 PM

...I hear the laughter of someone off in the distance,
but that so said person won't come post, just get this,
you better believe that I'll leave and you will not miss,
either me or some that might be, so ask for forgiveness,
step up to the challenge and be proud to make that post,
did you lose your fire you liar because you never almost,
seen you do anything but one-liners don't mind yours, diagnosed,
with that obsessive disorder for real or your massive head boast,
you should know who you are since it's always the same,
I know you know who you are unless you're insane in the brain,
come out with no fear and no doubt, go ahead and maintain,
name status of fame that you claim you proclaimed it became...

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#279 Icker

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 08:29 PM

That line be armo was joke :lol:

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Posted October 24, 2008 - 08:44 PM

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lol thx :)
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